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      You felt... Awkward being Alfred's girlfriend..
  You weren't the skinniest, that was the problem. It was weird being the companion of a mussily  guy, when you didn't even have a flat stomach.. He could've picked anyone..  Bella, Amanda, Allica, Deena, Kayla.. Anyone.. Though for some reason, he loved you. Why? You were just a chubby high-school girl. You weren't anything special to a guy like him. Sometimes it seemed embarrassing..

      Did you embarrass him...?

      That was one of the questions you wished dearly someone could answer. This weekend, you were asked to go with your boyfriend to one of his infamous parties. You almost declined, though you know you would feel bad later, so you said 'yes'.

     "(Name)? (Naaammeee)? (NAME)!"
    You were then pulled from your thoughts.

   "Finally.", Alfred started, "I've been trying to get your attention for aaaggesss!", The boy exclaimed, smiling. He always did that.. Smiled...
  Were you even worth those beautiful smiles..? You sure as hell didn't think so.




     *At the party*




      "You ready to have some fun, babe?", Alfred had an arm around you. You forced a smile, "Y-Yeah! Of course!", You spluttered, feeling guilty for lying.. You looked around, seeing all these girls in tank-tops and skimpy little outfits. If you wore that, you'd probably look like a whale.. They'd probably call you one too..

       After a while, you'd danced with your boyfriend, earning envious, and annoyed stares. Then, he'd sat you down on a couch, "You okay, babe..?", You nodded, "No.. What's wrong..?", He brushed a hand over your cheek.


     A group of drunk girls came up to the both of you, "Heeeeeey, Al, baby, W-Why don't you leave her, and c-come with ussss..?", One asked, "Yeeeah! Have some fun!~", Another said, "Sh-She's such a waste of space!! She's an elephant, I sweear!", Your eyes widened, ready to cry. Were you really that big..? You were only a little big.. Not too much bigger... "No."  Huh? You looked up. Alfred had said it.. The girls whined, "Fiiinnneee!", They sighed. As they walked away, he yelled, "She has WAAAAYY bigger boobs than you guys! Plus, she's gorgeous as HEEEELLL!", You smiled.. Brightly.


     He looked down at you, "Sorry.. Babe.", You simply smiled wider, "No.. Thank you, hero...", He smiled as well, "I love you.. No matter what your body looks like.. But let me tell you. Those curves are fffiiiiinnne. And those boobs, Daaaayum~", You giggled, blushing. "I-I love you too...~", You both smiled, kissing him.


      It was so refreshing to have someone that loved you for you.. It was amazing. He didn't judge. The first boy to never judge you for your size. He made you happy. You made him happy. On Monday, when you and Alfred bumped into those girls, he tossed a Twinky wrapper at them, earning gasps, "Carbs!!", They all whined, "Calories!", One squeaked, as if she'd pass out. So dramatic..

     When lunch rolled around, Arthur had asked you for help in English. He was having some trouble on a poem. Arthur of all people.. You 'tsked'. Finding some rhymes and rhythms to match, he thanked you bunches, placing a kiss on your hand. You blushed, before Alfred ripped your wrist from his grasp, "MY girlfriend!", He pouted, coiling around you, like a snake.


     You giggled.. Two...? Two people after the chubby girl..? How? You were amazed.. This made you so happy.. So very happy..


    You went to Alfred's that night, to do some 'studying', Well.. That was the excuse you gave your mom.
  Cuddled up in Al's bed, he hugged you to his chest. "A-Al..?", You asked, looking up at him.
"Yeees?"



      "Thank you...", "What? For what?!", You began o tear up. "F-For not judging me... F-F-For not thinking I was just 'the fat girl'. F-F--or L-Loving mee!", You hugged him tight. He frowned sadly, "Awh, baby.. Sh-Shh.. There there.. I'd never think of you  as 'the fat girl..', He cringed at the stupid nickname. Why? You were beautiful, "I love you.. Don't cry...", He kissed your forehead. "I love you too... Alfie..."


       That night, you fell asleep in Alfred's arms.. Not going to school the next day. You stayed in bed, cuddling your love,
                                                                         Sweet nothings being exchanged..
You are beautiful...
Trust me.
I made this, because personally, I don't feel beautiful.
I'm a bit overweight, like reader.
I have a bit of pudge on me.

I'm also soososososooo sorry..

I've had so many family problems, I've had no times or motivation to write.
Same as in the summer.. It was just.. Awful...
Again, I am genuinely sorry..
My life has been turned upside-down..
Anyways. Enough about my stupid problemos.

Enjoy~
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:iconrj223:
Rj223 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
I'm oddly not the only chubby one in my class! A few of the 'popular' girls are on the bigger size.
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Lightstarrrr Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm more on the chubby side :T. All is fine except that someone said "ew you wear size 16, lose some weight that's gross" I just swiped it off x3
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
im the chubby one no one makes fun of me at school though all r nice well not all of themRoll Eyes CURSE YOU! 
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Norges-butter Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful! I love fanfics like this, they rise my self esteem and they make me not look so down on my self.
                                                                              Lovely Shoujo (Pretty Please) [V3] 
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totallyunfamousmira Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This actually raised my self esteem. I also do not find myself to be beautiful or even pretty. This is amazing, I thank you. This little One-shot Just brought back my hope that someday, someone might love. You are absolutely amazing!

(Sorry for ranting and confessing... Just felt like I could tell you things)
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gohagosa Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Is there an Arthur one? XD
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bluberrysocks Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
i have friends like that, they may not be the prettiest flowers in the meadow, but they have the prettiest personalities. i know it was cheesy but it's true. being pretty is over-rated. be yourself, i'm on the chubby side but people love me for me not for what i look like. dumb whores screaming at a twinkies wrapper, twinkies are freaking life changing!:pissed: rvmp 
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biggestmunkfan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm chubbier than most of my friends and family members yet have the Biggest boobs.Even my curvier friends don't have as big as boobs as me.(I don't say fatter or chubbier I say Curvier when talkin bout people.)
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gohagosa Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
THIS WAS AWESOME!!! XDDD I LAUGHED AT THE PART WHEN ALFRED YELLED

SHE HAS WAAAAAY MORE BIGGER BOOBS!!! XDDDD
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animeHetaliagirl16 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Thank you for writing this! I often feel like this to and worry people will call me fat. I actually do feel overweight and trying to loose it. But anyway great story!!
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Kaosu-to-Anaki Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Artist
Alfred: "She has WAAAAYY bigger boobs than you guys! Plus, she's gorgeous as HEEEELLL!
Me: :iconostopityouplz:
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
At te Arthur part I could literally hear Alfred. Except he was Arthur was running away screaming while al gave chase yelling: BACK OFF BITCH!!!

-hissing everywhere-


Oh imagination~ you give me joy~
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ElectricCupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:icone3eplz:
WUBS<3

Also I feel bad that at the part with Arthur, all I heard in my brain is "MINE BITCH~ *Hiss*" X3
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NekoFan123 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
i am slightly overweight. My stomach make me feal VERY self-concious and all of that stuff. But, I wont let people judge me even if I don't think highly of myself!! I luv the story. It was amazing!! :3
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Aww, so sweet. Thanks. I know I'm a bit overweight, and I get so self-conscious sometimes. :) You are awesome!
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rstoker2017 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
i like this story because i also have self-confidence issues. it really IS nice to have a guy like that. :)
and don't worry, as long as you keep trying and just dress flatteringly, you're SURE to find him. <3
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nyeeh! >w< I swear the chubby reader ones are so cute! I just want to turn them all into plushies and huggle them forebers!
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sumime Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I also saw a pic of you, Y U SO CUTE!!!!!
Plus I did like this story thanks for writing it! :)
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PeaceandIceCream Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist
Tsk Tsk. I saw picture of you. Very pretty, lovey
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:iconsara2015:
sara2015 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
I'm on the same page with ya. Everyone judges me on how i look.

I wish there was someone like Affie for me!!!!1
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sara2015 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry i for my spelling!
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Kyuubi-Hime360 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm also a bit overweight... all the guys in my school are insensitive assholes... *is completely oblivious*
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Mia16 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww this story is soooooooo amazing :heart::heart::heart:
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thejaycee1205 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Boobs. Of course he had to bring up the boobs. XD
And "Studying." XD

But I loved it. :+favlove:
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NekoGirl1993 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
Awww, I want a boyfriend like Al~ I really love this, it's so cute :iconawwwplz:
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NanamiOfFallingSnow Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
You made this fluffian squeal XD
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this. Great job.
Also..
I know I don't know you, and you don't know me, but I hope whatever is happening with you and your family, turns out okay. And I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel it, but im sure you are beautiful.. don't let anyone tell you different
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Waaah!~ This is so cute! >u< <333
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
YEY YEY YEY
SNUGGIES!
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FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehehehe!~ :iconsnugglyplz:
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Savanir Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
I like it! and well, in my case it's the oposite and people ask me if I have anorexia... but I really liked this~~
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
*Pets*
I don't know what to say to that xD
I guess... TELL THEM YOU'RE JUST HAWT.(?XD)
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Savanir Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
I think they are jealous
I did punch a guy because of that, what kind of question is that
"do you have anorexia?"
how can a complete stranger ask that with a complete straight face...
whoops, I am raging out here
sorry about that
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IzzyLuvsYou22 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for writing this. All of the fanfictions and stuff I have read they have always been insanely skinny girls and I am definitely not skinny. This is my favorite story by far :). I love this a lot :D.
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
:iconsmile2plz: YEY
Und, I know.
Most fanfiction is all about these fit-ass girls.
WELL YOU KNOW WHAT.
NO. NO.
NOT ALL GIRLS ARE LIKE THAT.
c:
SO WHAT IF MY HIP BONES DON'T STICK OUT MEEHH
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IzzyLuvsYou22 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup :D. I am really happy that someone wrote an awesome story and that awesome story was wrote by you so that makes you awesome :). I love this story very much :).
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yaoi53 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
I have read alot of stories ever since I found DA. And none of them have made me more happy about what I look like. Thank You for making me feel important.
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
II'm glad I made you feel important :iconsmile2plz:
YOU ARE ALWAYS IMPORTANT IN MY EYES.
Even doe I dunno yew xD
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yaoi53 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
I duun no yew, but I lurv yew too. :)
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Roseheart201 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful! :D

Ironically, I talk to the America on Fanfiction. And he says that he likes chubby girls. xD He even has a story on it....!

*Cough.* Sorry. Well anyways, I think you did a really great job on this.

And yeah, I'm fat, too.......Whatever.
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
*Huggles*
Beautiful, doe.
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Flies-with-Angels Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for writing this. It just put a huge smile on my face. I used to think of myself as just fat, I still do sometimes, but people like you who write things like this help me recover from my eating disorder. You rock!
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
:iconsupertighthugplz:
Oh yew.
Don't you dare think such a thing.
If you still think you, and other people think that you're fat,
remember.
I THINK YOU'RE SKINNEH AND BEAUTIFUL.
ANYONE WHO SAYS DIFFERENT WILL FEEL THE WRATH OF MACHO-MAN-RANDY-SAVAGE.
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Flies-with-Angels Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thanks :)
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Doodlez123 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Three cheers for all my fellow pudgy girls! :iconwoohooplz:

Great story! Loved it! :iconiloveitplz:
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
YES. :U
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LetMeBelieve Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think being chubby is awesome:3
I really liked this story i hope you write more:)
((Agsgsgagsgas alfreds a boobie lover XDD))
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
((The boobie lover thang made me giggle))
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ITxIRxLxS Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: my boyfriend is just like Alfred:iconloveloveplz: he makes me feel so beautiful
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German-Idiota Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
YOU LUCKY WOMAN.
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